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Can someone show me the mistakes in this text please?
As time went by, global warming has become a highly controversial issue. Many people share the view that the government must allocate resources to address this problem, whereas others argue that investments in the environment will mean a waste of money.
First of all, damages to the environment not only do they cause more and more animals and plants in danger of extinction but also humanity’s indiscriminate use of gases has affected even the atmosphere. This can be seen in the increasing size of the hole in the ozone layer.
By contrast, the detractors a few scientists and politicians, believe that this is a natural process and we don’t have to worry about it. However, from my point of view, it is crucial that government, companies, and society as a whole, all work together to lessen the damages mankind could cause.
In conclusión, I would say there is no doubt that all countries do need to consider strong measures that allow increasing awareness in society about the changes that are suffering our planet and how dangerous it could be. And everyone must be educated on how improve this situation and in that way contribute to leave a better planet for future generations.
Can someone show me the mistakes in this text please?
As time went by, global warming has become a highly controversial issue. Many people share the view that the government must allocate resources to address this problem, whereas others argue that investments in the environment will mean a waste of money.
First of all, damages to the environment not only do they cause more and more animals and plants in danger of extinction but also humanity’s indiscriminate use of gases has affected even the atmosphere. This can be seen in the increasing size of the hole in the ozone layer.
By contrast, the detractors a few scientists and politicians, believe that this is a natural process and we don’t have to worry about it. However, from my point of view, it is crucial that government, companies, and society as a whole, all work together to lessen the damages mankind could cause.
In conclusión, I would say there is no doubt that all countries do need to consider strong measures that allow increasing awareness in society about the changes that are suffering our planet and how dangerous it could be. And everyone must be educated on how improve this situation and in that way contribute to leave a better planet for future generations.
As time went by, global warming has become a highly controversial issue. Many people share the view that the government must allocate resources to address this problem, whereas others argue that investments in the environment will mean a waste of money.
First of all, damages to the environment not only do they cause more and more animals and plants in danger of extinction but also humanity’s indiscriminate use of gases has affected even the atmosphere. This can be seen in the increasing size of the hole in the ozone layer.
By contrast, the detractors a few scientists and politicians, believe that this is a natural process and we don’t have to worry about it. However, from my point of view, it is crucial that government, companies, and society as a whole, all work together to lessen the damages mankind could cause.
In conclusión, I would say there is no doubt that all countries do need to consider strong measures that allow increasing awareness in society about the changes that are suffering our planet and how dangerous it could be. And everyone must be educated on how improve this situation and in that way contribute to leave a better planet for future generations.
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As time has gone by, global warming has become a highly controversial issue. Many people share the view that the government must allocate resources to address this problem, whereas others argue that investments in the environment will be a waste of money.
First of all, damages to the environment not only place more and more animals in danger of extinction - humanity's indiscriminate release of greenhouse gases has affected the atmosphere. This can be seen in the increasing size of the ozone layer.
By contrast, the detractors (a few scientists and politicians) believe that this is a natural process and we shouldn't worry about it. However, from my point of view, it is crucial that governments, companies, and society as a whole all work together to lessen the damages mankind could cause.
Undoubtedly, all countries do need to consider strong measures that increase social awareness about the changes our planet is suffering from and how dangerous it could be. Everyone must be educated on how to improve the situation. In that sense, we can all contribute to protecting the planet for future generations.
(This paragraph is accurate and complex - well done! I've just altered a couple of minor grammatical errors and changed some sentences to make them sound more natural)
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Global warming has become an increasingly controversial issue. Many people share the view that the government needs to allocate resources to address this problem, whereas others argue that investing in the environment is a waste of money.
First of all, damage to the environment is putting more and more animals and plants at greater risk of extinction. Secondly, humanity's indiscriminate use of tear gas has affected the atmosphere tremendously. This can be seen in the increasing size of the hole in the ozone layer.
In contrast, the detractors (???) a few scientists and politicians, believe that this is a natural process and that there is no need to worry. However, from my point of view, it is crucial that the government, companies, and society all work together to lessen our impact on the environment.
In conclusion, I would say that all countries need to take measures to raise awareness about how our planet is suffering. Everyone needs to be educated on how to improve the situation in order to contribute to leaving a better planet for future generations.
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@JamesFarrow @PaolaJE btw it depends if you mean a specific government or multiple governments
I put "the government" because I assumed you were referring to one country but *I think* it should be "governments" if you mean multiple
It's a bit complicated.. I wasn't totally sure about the rules for when government is singular or plural.. lol
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