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As time goes by, global warming has become a highly controversial issue. Many people share the view that governments must allocate resources to address this problem, whereas others argue that investments in the environment will mean a waste of money.
First of all, damages to the environment not only do they cause more and more animals and plants become in danger of extinction but also humanity’s indiscriminate release of greenhouse gases has affected even the atmosphere. This can be seen in the increasing size of the hole in the ozone layer.
By contrast, the detractors (a few scientists and politicians), believe that this is a natural process and there is not need to worry about it. However, from my point of view, it is crucial that government, companies, and society as a whole, all work together to lessen the damages mankind could cause.
In conclusión, I would say there is no doubt that all countries do need to consider strong measures that allow increasing awareness in society about the changes that our planet are suffering and how dangerous it could be. Everyone must be educated on how to improve the situation. In that sense we all can contribute to protecting the planet for future generations.