hello! my homework was to write a review about "the crush, 2010". could you check if it is grammatically correct?

The main plot of this short movie is concentrated on eight-year old boy, who has a crush on his English teacher. Some circumstances cause that the boy challenges to the duel for life and death teacher's fiance.

I have to admit that the director seized this subject from an atypical side. In movies like this children always lose their interest in their teachers, when they go to next grade. But not here. Here we have the child who challenges to the duel a man, to defend "his" woman's honour.

Now, let's take a look to little boy's acting. We have here Oran Creagh who played Ardal Travis. Despite his young age and demanding role, he did pretty good job. What is interesting, he is son of the director. I tried to find other movies with him, but ineffectively. But his the first and the last role was appreciated we can see, because the movie was nominated to the Oscars.

In the movie there is a moment where we are wondering if the little boy really can do everything for the teacher even when it means do the worst. But to know what, you have to see this movie.

In my view it is worth to see the movie. There is fun but at the same time it seizes serious subject.

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hello! my homework was to write a review about "the crush, 2010". could you check if it is grammatically correct?

The main plot of this short movie is concentrated on eight-year old boy, who has a crush on his English teacher. Some circumstances cause that the boy challenges to the duel for life and death teacher's fiance.

I have to admit that the director seized this subject from an atypical side. In movies like this children always lose their interest in their teachers, when they go to next grade. But not here. Here we have the child who challenges to the duel a man, to defend "his" woman's honour.

Now, let's take a look to little boy's acting. We have here Oran Creagh who played Ardal Travis. Despite his young age and demanding role, he did pretty good job. What is interesting, he is son of the director. I tried to find other movies with him, but ineffectively. But his the first and the last role was appreciated we can see, because the movie was nominated to the Oscars.

In the movie there is a moment where we are wondering if the little boy really can do everything for the teacher even when it means do the worst. But to know what, you have to see this movie.

In my view it is worth to see the movie. There is fun but at the same time it seizes serious subject.

vanessa234 · Answer

The main plot of this short movie centers around an eight-year old boy, who has a crush on his English teacher. Some circumstances arise that cause the boy to challenge his teacher's fiancé to a duel to the death.

I have to admit that the director had a different perspective on this subject than most do. In movies like this, children always lose their interest in their teachers when they move on to the next grade. But not here. Here we have the child never loses his interest, going as far as to challenge a man to defend "his" woman's honor.

Now, let's take a look at the little boy's acting. The actor Oran Creagh played Ardal Travis. Despite his young age and the demanding role, he did a pretty good job. Interestingly, he is the son of the director. I tried to find other movies with him, but to no avail. This was his first and only role, but we can see it was appreciated as the movie was nominated for an Oscar.

In the movie there is a moment where we wondered if the little boy would really do anything for the teacher, specifically, if he would do one of the worst things you can do for her. But to know what, you have to see this movie.

In my opinion, it is worth it to see this movie. It is funny while taking on a serious topic at the same time.

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