‎"Maria came here today. Obviously she isn't the perfect one (no one is), but I like her.
She usually talks about people behind their backs, bad things; She kiss people that she doesn't know.. And I don't like it.
But I don't be mad with that, it's her life. I mean, with everything, she is a such good person in my opinion. She always help me when I ask her, give me conselaus, make artesanat stuff for me... These sister's things. " 聼起來自然嗎?

Maria came here today. Obviously she isn't perfect (no one is), but I like her. She usually talks about people behind there backs, bad things; She kisses people that she doesn't know, and I don't like it. But I'm not mad at her, it's her life. I mean, she is a good person in my opinion. She always helps me when I ask.

for the rest I couldn't correct is as I don't know what you mean with 'conselaus' and 'artesanat', but I hope the bit that I corrected helps