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2018年3月28日
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Free theme.
I don't like free themes and I had no idea what to write about. Then my mom advised me to write about the "ice age" in Moscow in this March. I don't think that it's a good theme, but it's really cold here in this March. And it was snowing all past week long. Hey, Nature! We would like it is already being the spring now! 聼起來自然嗎?
Free theme.
I don't like free themes and I had no idea what to write about. Then my mom advised me to write about the "ice age" in Moscow in this March. I don't think that it's a good theme, but it's really cold here in this March. And it was snowing all past week long. Hey, Nature! We would like it is already being the spring now! 聼起來自然嗎?
I don't like free themes and I had no idea what to write about. Then my mom advised me to write about the "ice age" in Moscow in this March. I don't think that it's a good theme, but it's really cold here in this March. And it was snowing all past week long. Hey, Nature! We would like it is already being the spring now! 聼起來自然嗎?
If something isn't good, tell me please!
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- 英語 (英國)
有點不自然
Generally very good, just some phrases are a bit awkward.
For example don’t say in this March, remove the “in”.
For the snowing sentence say “and it was snowing the whole of last week”.
Lastly “Hey, Nature! We would like it to already be Spring!”
Or if you want it more demanding say “We want it to be Spring now!”
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- 英語 (英國)
有點不自然
Generally very good, just some phrases are a bit awkward.
For example don’t say in this March, remove the “in”.
For the snowing sentence say “and it was snowing the whole of last week”.
Lastly “Hey, Nature! We would like it to already be Spring!”
Or if you want it more demanding say “We want it to be Spring now!”
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