I like Japanese pop idol. Especially Nogizaka46. So I’m following the social media of fashion brand by which they're a model. I’m checking it to buy same clothes.
I have freckles. I think they’re my charm point. But I don’t like freckles in a doll. I think the doll want a perfect figure. So if I buy Barbie or Lammily, I choose Barbie. 聼起來自然嗎?

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"I like Japanese pop idols, especially Nogizaka46. So I’m following the social media account of the fashion brand in which they're a model. I’m checking it to buy some clothes. I have freckles; I think they’re my charming point. But I don’t like freckles in a doll. I think the doll wants a perfect figure. So when I buy Barbie or Lammily, I choose Barbie."