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Could you please revise this article to approach native English?
This picture describes a hot-pot which is composed of many cultural elements at home and abroad, such as literature, moral values, and post-modern. Its tastes seem very delicious because of the abundant nutrition of multi-cultural elements.
The cartoon show not only a situation of the culture conflict between Chinese and the western but a unique form in the way. Since China has opened its doors widely to the outside world, many people of different nations are deeply interested in Chinese culture which is accepted. Additionally, Chinese also touch the foreign culture when more and more foreigners come to this east country. In this way, people who come from different nations can understand each other and live peaceably in the world.
In my opinion, all national culture is a precious heritage belonged to humanity. With the development of the economic globalization, the blending of the different culture has become a necessary trend. Only grasping the current trend accurately can we bring benefits to people all over the world.
Could you please revise this article to approach native English?
This picture describes a hot-pot which is composed of many cultural elements at home and abroad, such as literature, moral values, and post-modern. Its tastes seem very delicious because of the abundant nutrition of multi-cultural elements.
The cartoon show not only a situation of the culture conflict between Chinese and the western but a unique form in the way. Since China has opened its doors widely to the outside world, many people of different nations are deeply interested in Chinese culture which is accepted. Additionally, Chinese also touch the foreign culture when more and more foreigners come to this east country. In this way, people who come from different nations can understand each other and live peaceably in the world.
In my opinion, all national culture is a precious heritage belonged to humanity. With the development of the economic globalization, the blending of the different culture has become a necessary trend. Only grasping the current trend accurately can we bring benefits to people all over the world.
This picture describes a hot-pot which is composed of many cultural elements at home and abroad, such as literature, moral values, and post-modern. Its tastes seem very delicious because of the abundant nutrition of multi-cultural elements.
The cartoon show not only a situation of the culture conflict between Chinese and the western but a unique form in the way. Since China has opened its doors widely to the outside world, many people of different nations are deeply interested in Chinese culture which is accepted. Additionally, Chinese also touch the foreign culture when more and more foreigners come to this east country. In this way, people who come from different nations can understand each other and live peaceably in the world.
In my opinion, all national culture is a precious heritage belonged to humanity. With the development of the economic globalization, the blending of the different culture has become a necessary trend. Only grasping the current trend accurately can we bring benefits to people all over the world.
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1. A picture cannot “describe” something, it “shows” stuff.
2. Take out “which is” in the first sentence.
3. “...many cultural elements at home and abroad” sounds weird to me. Try “both Asian and Western cultural elements” or something, if I understood correctly.
4. “post-modern” is an adjective/adverb (I get mixed up between those two), either ways they cannot be there on their own. Post-modern what? Lifestyle? Technology?
5. “Its tastes” wont work because a hot-pot can’t taste stuff, so you should rather go with “it looks very delicious” or something like that. And I advise to avoid “seems” because it gives a negative feeling, so it “seems” delicious but actually not. (Or it might be just me ;) )
6. I don’t know if “nutrition” is a good choice, because a food is not necessarily tasty when it’s nutritious.
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1. A picture cannot “describe” something, it “shows” stuff.
2. Take out “which is” in the first sentence.
3. “...many cultural elements at home and abroad” sounds weird to me. Try “both Asian and Western cultural elements” or something, if I understood correctly.
4. “post-modern” is an adjective/adverb (I get mixed up between those two), either ways they cannot be there on their own. Post-modern what? Lifestyle? Technology?
5. “Its tastes” wont work because a hot-pot can’t taste stuff, so you should rather go with “it looks very delicious” or something like that. And I advise to avoid “seems” because it gives a negative feeling, so it “seems” delicious but actually not. (Or it might be just me ;) )
6. I don’t know if “nutrition” is a good choice, because a food is not necessarily tasty when it’s nutritious.
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7. “The cartoon show” has a grammar mistake, it’s either “showed” or “shows”. And add an “us” or the “readers”.
8. “Not only a situation of culture conflict” So it DID show the BOTH conflict AND “unique form”? Also it should be “cultural conflict” between “China and the Western world”.
9. “unique form in the way” sounds confusing, try “unique harmony”.
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10. Change “since” to “ever since”
11. “Chinese culture which is accepted”?? Take out “which is accepted”? I don’t know what you’re trying to say...
12. “Additionally, Chinese also...” it should either be “China” or “the Chinese people”
13. “Touch” makes no sense... We’re you thinking of something like “接触”? English doesn’t really work the same, so try “are also exposed to”.
14. “Come to this eastern country”
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15. I would edit “In this way, people who come from different nations can understand each other and live peaceably in the world. “ to “thus, people of different ethnicities and backgrounds are able to better understand each other, and live more peacefully in the world.”
16. “All national culture” to “all cultures are”
17. “Different cultures”, remember it’s plural.
18. The last sentence is a little off topic? And “only by grasping”
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Thanks for your detailed answer. Are you Chinese? Could you please give me your Facebook ID for making a friend?
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@yukonzhang yeah I’m Chinese but I don’t really use Facebook very much, sorry.
I have no social life 😢
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