I think that it is not enough aids for the disabled in Japan and Japanese government should start more effective policies for the disabled. Why do I say that?
This is because I believe that we can compensate handicap and I want to say that if there are auxiliary measures, disabled people are not disabled. For example, people who use wheelchairs cannot walk up stairs, but if there is a slope, they have no difficulty moving without any help.
That is why if there are people who have difficulty living in Japan because of their handicaps, it means that Japanese government does not make every effort to help disabled people.
Eventually, I think that Japanese government should spend much money and build a barrier-free society.

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​‎I think that there is not enough aid for the disabled in Japan and Japanese government should start more effective policies for the disabled. Why do I say that?
This is because I believe that we can compensate the handicapped people and I want to say that if there are auxiliary measures, disabled people are not disabled. For example, people who use wheelchairs cannot walk up stairs, but if there is a slope, they have no difficulty moving without any help.
If there are people who have difficulty living in Japan because of their disabilities, it means that the Japanese government does not make every effort to help disabled people.
Eventually, I think that the Japanese government should spend more money and build a barrier-free society.

I wrote this passage.
Please tell me if I made mistakes.