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Obesity is a big problem everyplace in the world now, and governments in many coutries are trying every possible means that might improve the situation. One humorous idea is the one of Mexico City. Just by doing ten squats, you get a free ticket for subway or bus. A special machine is installed at every station, on which you move your body up and down ten times. Then the machine considers you've spent enough calories, and now you are free to go through the gate. 聼起來自然嗎?
Obesity is a big problem everyplace in the world now, and governments in many coutries are trying every possible means that might improve the situation. One humorous idea is the one of Mexico City. Just by doing ten squats, you get a free ticket for subway or bus. A special machine is installed at every station, on which you move your body up and down ten times. Then the machine considers you've spent enough calories, and now you are free to go through the gate. 聼起來自然嗎?
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- 英語 (美國)
有點不自然
This sounds great! Except I would change 'everyplace' to 'everywhere', 'coutries' is spelled 'countries', and I would change 'governments' to 'the government.'
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Thank you so much for the kind comment!
Does this revised sentence make sense then?
"Obesity is a big problem everywhere now, and the government in many countries is trying every possible means that might improve the situation."
Does this revised sentence make sense then?
"Obesity is a big problem everywhere now, and the government in many countries is trying every possible means that might improve the situation."
- 英語 (美國)
有點不自然
Actually, I think it would sound the best this way: "Obesity is a major issue throughout the world. In many countries, the government is trying their best to improve the situation."
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