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¿Alguien podría ayudarme a corregir este resumen en inglés de la historia de Edgar Allan Poe Black Cat?
¿Alguien podría ayudarme a corregir este resumen en inglés de la historia de Edgar Allan Poe Black Cat?
Black Cat - Edgar Allan Poe
"From his prison cell, a narrator write the story of his life...
he sayed that from the day he was born, he was kind and loved animals, as he gets older, taking care of pets was his hobby.
he married and his wife loved animals too...
one of their animals, is the black cat called pluto.
he says he was an alcoholic
hard-working and used to spend his days in bars drinking like
crazy...and hit his wife and pets... except pluto.
But, one night completely drunk...
the poor cat Pluto suffered the dementia of his owner...
The man caught him so he would not escape, but the cat bit his arm and the man went mad and with a knife He cuts pluto's eye...
The cat was in constant flight from his master, until a
day, he could not escape...
the man took the animal and put a rope around his neck,
and then he hangs pluto from a tree, murdering him.
that night, his house catches fire and burns down...
They managed to escape, but they lost everything ...
whose blame was? of course the revenge of pluto...
In the morning, when visiting the ruins of what used to be his house
He saw petrified that, on one of the walls
remained almost intact...at his bedroom wall there was the figure of a black cat with a rope around his neck...
Several days later the man continued to get drunk in
the bars. And one afternoon he saw a black cat watching him from
one of the drink barrels of the place ...
the very scared man felt a chill when he saw it and noticed
its great resemblance to Pluton, except that it had a spot
white in his heart...
When caressing him, the cat became and followed him home,
becoming the new pet.
Her wife was very happy...But, the repulsion towards
the cat soon arrived...
the man realized that this cat also lacked an eye...
he realises that the cat looks like pluto...
the man was too afraid of the cat to abuse it...
he can't forget what pluto did to him...
the man was going crazy...
He felt that the cat observed him...
one day, going down through the cellar, the cat made
the man almost fell down the stairs...
so, in a fit of irritation, he tries to kill the cat with an ax...
but his wife got in his way to try
defend it
she stops him and he buries the axe in her brain.
The man decides to hide the corpse of his
woman on the walls and then look for the animal that causes
of homicide. But his had hidden...
After many time...
one day, the police appears in his house, but he knew
that his hiding place was safe so he acted with total kindly...
not without first mentioning to the police the solidity of their beauty
home touching the place where the corpse was of his wife...
But, in that moment an inhuman scream echoed through
from the wall causing the man to recoil in fright!
the police take down the wall to find the horror...
his wife's corpse lay bloodied and on his head
a huge black cat without an eye..."
"From his prison cell, a narrator write the story of his life...
he sayed that from the day he was born, he was kind and loved animals, as he gets older, taking care of pets was his hobby.
he married and his wife loved animals too...
one of their animals, is the black cat called pluto.
he says he was an alcoholic
hard-working and used to spend his days in bars drinking like
crazy...and hit his wife and pets... except pluto.
But, one night completely drunk...
the poor cat Pluto suffered the dementia of his owner...
The man caught him so he would not escape, but the cat bit his arm and the man went mad and with a knife He cuts pluto's eye...
The cat was in constant flight from his master, until a
day, he could not escape...
the man took the animal and put a rope around his neck,
and then he hangs pluto from a tree, murdering him.
that night, his house catches fire and burns down...
They managed to escape, but they lost everything ...
whose blame was? of course the revenge of pluto...
In the morning, when visiting the ruins of what used to be his house
He saw petrified that, on one of the walls
remained almost intact...at his bedroom wall there was the figure of a black cat with a rope around his neck...
Several days later the man continued to get drunk in
the bars. And one afternoon he saw a black cat watching him from
one of the drink barrels of the place ...
the very scared man felt a chill when he saw it and noticed
its great resemblance to Pluton, except that it had a spot
white in his heart...
When caressing him, the cat became and followed him home,
becoming the new pet.
Her wife was very happy...But, the repulsion towards
the cat soon arrived...
the man realized that this cat also lacked an eye...
he realises that the cat looks like pluto...
the man was too afraid of the cat to abuse it...
he can't forget what pluto did to him...
the man was going crazy...
He felt that the cat observed him...
one day, going down through the cellar, the cat made
the man almost fell down the stairs...
so, in a fit of irritation, he tries to kill the cat with an ax...
but his wife got in his way to try
defend it
she stops him and he buries the axe in her brain.
The man decides to hide the corpse of his
woman on the walls and then look for the animal that causes
of homicide. But his had hidden...
After many time...
one day, the police appears in his house, but he knew
that his hiding place was safe so he acted with total kindly...
not without first mentioning to the police the solidity of their beauty
home touching the place where the corpse was of his wife...
But, in that moment an inhuman scream echoed through
from the wall causing the man to recoil in fright!
the police take down the wall to find the horror...
his wife's corpse lay bloodied and on his head
a huge black cat without an eye..."
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- 英語 (美國)
The major problem is that the tenses are mixed up. In general, it should all be past tense. You can use present to refer to the past, same as Spanish, but it's less common in English and not really appropriate here.
Also: the constant use of "..." is a little strange and there are many places where a Capital letter should be used.
sayed -> said
as he gets older -> and that as he gets older
dementia -> fury, rage
a day -> one day
murdering -> killing
blame was -> blame was it
He saw petrified -> He was petrified to see
drink barrels -> not sure what this means. Beer kegs, maybe.
spot white -> white spot
caressing -> petting (caressing sounds sexual)
became -> came
repulsion -> revulsion
kindly -> kindness
solidity -> not sure what this means here
beauty home -> beautiful home
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- 英語 (美國)
The major problem is that the tenses are mixed up. In general, it should all be past tense. You can use present to refer to the past, same as Spanish, but it's less common in English and not really appropriate here.
Also: the constant use of "..." is a little strange and there are many places where a Capital letter should be used.
sayed -> said
as he gets older -> and that as he gets older
dementia -> fury, rage
a day -> one day
murdering -> killing
blame was -> blame was it
He saw petrified -> He was petrified to see
drink barrels -> not sure what this means. Beer kegs, maybe.
spot white -> white spot
caressing -> petting (caressing sounds sexual)
became -> came
repulsion -> revulsion
kindly -> kindness
solidity -> not sure what this means here
beauty home -> beautiful home
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